college prep. english.

This is my handy work from resuscitating an ugly, dead, paragraph my teacher gave our class. Enjoy~ ^^

Dear Jack,
I want a man who knows what love is all about. You have ruined me for other men. A woman without her man is nothing! People who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior...I have no feelings whatsoever when we’re apart; you are: generous, kind, thoughtful, I yearn for you.
I can be forever happy, will you let me be yours?,
Jill